常聞市面書籍,句句實載:寫好英語二大作文,需要四種思維,八種套路,十六種框架,外加范文三十篇。內容翔實,圖文并茂,一瞥定價,囊中羞澀。紙比米貴,汝等請記:吾生有涯,而知亦無涯。以有涯隨無涯,殆矣。但凡大道,一定至簡。道亦有道,朝聞道,夕死不可矣!應師法自然,取之精華,為我所用:此謂師夷長技以制夷。
簡言之,大作文只寫三段,勿寫標題,150詞足矣,寧多勿少。
S1: This XX chart vividly depicts 翻譯題目 .
其中,XX可為pie, line, bar(餅圖,線圖,柱圖)
S2: To be specific, A occupies x%, which is the first.(先寫最大的)
S3: The second comes B, taking up y%. (再寫第二的)
S4: Meanwhile, z%, m% and n% are represented by C, D and E respectively.(不重要的小指標,扔一句話里就行)
其中A-E為指標,x%-n%為具體數值(寫數字即可,別寫成英文)。
以上四句,不僅涵蓋所有數值,且語態(tài)句型均變。不重詞匯,樸實無華,卻能斬獲高分。但只適用靜態(tài)圖(無時間變化的圖)。若有同一指標的不同時間變化,則屬動態(tài)圖,運用下面的框架:
S1: This XX chart vividly depicts 翻譯題目 .
S2: To be specific, A had experienced a climb from x% in 2010 to y% in 2020.
S3: On the contrary, the ten-year’s period had witnessed a sharp slump from m% to n% for the indicator B.
S4: And it is interesting to mention that C had remained stable during this stage, at z%.
以上假定了A是上漲,B是下降,C是持平的情況,請根據需要調換相應的詞。
提醒1:注意數據單位!不一定是%,有時是萬,十萬等,想想怎么換算成million.
提醒2:若數據沒超過6個,建議全寫。若超過6個,篩選重點寫。
S1: There are several reasons that can account for the figures described above.
S2: To begin with, as the pace of A and B grows faster and faster, this situation is becoming more obvious.
S3: What’s more, the emergence of C can also lead to this scene.
S4: Last but not least, we are nearer to the interconnected world which is now a global village, D can be obtained within minutes or even seconds.
這里的A和B的可替換詞:social change, internet, technology, innovation, transportation, commercialization, modernization, globalization等。
C的可替換詞:micromedia, share economy, gig economy, AI (Artificial Intelligence), e-books, online games, unendurable strain, intangible cultural heritage等。
D的可替換詞:information, tickets, suggestions, friends, sales, orders, academic papers, job opportunities, companionship, payment等。
(詞匯可參考泰祺系統階段英語講義:182-195頁)
提醒1:劃線部分可改為作文主題詞,更自然,不生硬。
提醒2:基礎好建議自己寫,擺脫框架限制。常見原因有:經濟、文化、政策、心理、環(huán)境、權利、風俗等。
S1: From what we have discussed above, we can safely jump to the conclusion that these changes will be continuous in the forthcoming future.
S2: We should spare no effort to make our world more beautiful, dimensional and vigorous. (字數不夠時,再寫本句;world建議換為作文主題詞)
全文提醒1:圖表如有時間年份,描圖用過去時(或過去完成時)。
全文提醒2:篇幅上第一段與第二段對等,或第二段稍多于第一段。
文畢于此,限于篇幅,未能詳述,怎不遺憾!系統寫作,知識眾多:題目不會譯怎辦,指標不會寫怎辦,格式怎辦,忘詞怎辦,寫錯怎辦。望多關注課堂,一始而終,勤勉聽課,自有答案。夢里不知身是客,醒來已是夢中人。昨夜星辰昨夜風,今朝努力要狂奔。愿各位朋友戒煙限酒,飲食適度,克制欲望,修煉身心;則高分可期!
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